Last night I visited another club for the purpose of gathering feedback on my semifinal speech. Afterwards, I did some thinking about where I am on the mission to Malaysia.
My sense is that I am just about finished with reviewing the feedback on the semifinal speech. With all due respect to last night's club, the feedback I am now getting is predominantly redundant or unhelpful. Telling me to "use the stage" is not a helpful message. Suggested additions (given that I am at an ideal 7:00) are no longer helpful. Comments on vocal variety are no longer helpful. I am listening intently to issues of emotional context, gestures, and so forth, but at each presentation they're decreasingly impactful.
For that speech, I am moving on to work with my coach for polishing. My sense is that I am now only at the stage of making adjustments, not amendments. Will the speech show up again? Absolutely---at a Speech Spectacular. But it is time for another change.
I am also supposed to prepare a second speech. And this one has not been battle tested. With the six weeks I have left, this one needs some club presentations and thorough evaluation. It's a speech I have not come to terms with. Starting July 21st, I will take this one to show.
It's a judgment call, but I think it the right call.
Trust yourself, David! And let me know when I can come see the new speech!
ReplyDeleteKarin